heidi chronicles: Feedback loop

Sunday, July 1, 2018

Feedback loop

My favorite piece of feedback on June's workshop piece was:

It feels like life, you’re writing sentences shaped the way life is.

This kind of feedback helps me keep writing.
This is why workshop is so important for writers, or at least for this one.

1. Loyalty.
2. Forbearance: self-control towards others.
3. Hardihood.
4. Generosity: not just a simple matter of giving away what one has, but "Largitas in a man caused him to set no store on greed or gifts, and to have nothing but contempt for bribes."
5. Benevolence. The Davidic ethic: It is the strongest quality of the preudomme - benevolence of the strong toward the weak.
6. Honor: honor is achieved by living up to the ideal of the preudomme and pursuing the qualities and behavior listed above.

7. Championship: everywhere and always be the champion of the Right and the Good against Injustice and Evil.

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